People in the community can buy cheaper products nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, no one can deny that we are able to buy anything we desire with ease.
Although
this
trend can be beneficial,
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, I believe, it can lead toward encouraging
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consumerism which
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numerous drawbacks that will out-weight the benefits. In
this
essay, I am going to illuminate my reasoning for
this
outcome. On the one hand, it is clear, acquiring goods with convenience has several great aspects. Every human
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has primal needs,
such
as food, housing and clothing, that has to be addressed. So, if we can be able to answer these
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with little effort, our quality of life will improve substantially.
For example
, if a scholar does not have to worry about his earnings and providing for his family, he can put more effort into his research and will come up with better results.
On the other hand
, I hold the opinion, a society of consumers have far more disadvantages.
First
, having everything at hand, and with a reasonable price will instigate more purchases and more debt for
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.
This
accumulated debt may result in
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of the economy and cause many to lose their fortune as we experienced in
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2000s. Another possible negative outcome is the culture of consumerism. In recent decades, a great proportion of
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is getting used to buying more without thinking twice.
Although
,
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can boost the GPD of the country,
however
, it can
also
despoil the earth. In fact, to provide the raw materials for our new goods, the earth has to be exploited more and more, which will result in
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environmental impact on our mother planet. In conclusion, in my eyes, the disadvantages of
this
situation will exceed the advantages.
Therefore
, it is crucial, we set a balance on our purchases to be able to address our needs while we preserve
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and the planet at the same time.
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