Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country.Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language

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to learning a
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language
to keep up communication between countries. Tourism, studies and work opportunities have attracted
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a huge
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travelling between
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countries
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speaking and
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must be knowing other
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lake
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your mother tongue. The purpose
to
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being multilingual is useful it will be being you
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with
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to be more easily and
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smoothly
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.
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, it will encourage many
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to travel and
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new places. In
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I will discuss the advantages of studying
language
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the language
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.
First
of all, if want to studies in many universities or increase opportunity to get a job.
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, the learn
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another language
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language
it will be to
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of skills and improve your minded and it will be helpful to be welcoming in
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company
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Facebook, Google, etc., there are hiring the best people no matter where they come from but they have a good education and best or high skills worker.
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, tourism is growing rapidly and travelling around the world be a trend in
this
day, you should be able to speak and express what are you think.
That is
the
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why
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study a new
language
.
On the other hand
, that many other reasons to be learning and to be a multilingual person.
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, many
chances
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will open when we are can talk with
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it will be
easily
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to get
scholarship
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to preparing
master
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or
doctor
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degree. In
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, it can
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your entertainment in life because can know the new things from other
culture
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such
as music or story and it will affect in your mind. In conclusion, people being multilingual are not only for travelling or studying, but
also
it is important to connect will all world.
Language
is the key to
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the understanding
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of
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humanity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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