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Some people believe that a lot of research is a waste of time and money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that scientific investigation has been playing a significant role in today’s world.
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 of folks reckon that it is merely a
wastage
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 of our precious resources
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 time and money.  I partially agree with the viewpoint. On the one hand, there are enormous advantages of experimental
research
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.
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 and foremost
is that
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  the tests have brought many unprecedented changes for the welfare of humankind. There were many fatal diseases with which individuals were dying at an alarming rate. But, with the accurate results of scientific testing, treatment of
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 diseases could be possible and
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, these are proved to be a boon for society.
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, the recent attack of the
covid-19
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 virus has taken away a million people’s lives. Residents all over the world are now able to fight against the pandemic only
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the
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medicines
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 as Pfizer, Covishield,
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and Covaxine
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. The medicines are, undoubtedly, the result of experiments.
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, the
research
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 has helped to increase the fertility of the soil which in turn has revolutionised agriculture productivity.
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, it is irrefutable to say that scientific
research
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 is a waste of
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time
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 and funds.
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, false outcomes of experimental analysis insist society
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 that it is a waste of both valuable resources. Sometimes after long
research
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, which involves a team of scientists and various expensive science  equipment, results are proved to be wrong. It causes
human
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humans
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as well as
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government
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the government
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 to regret it as the finances could be spent on other severe social issues
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 as environmental problems.
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, I strongly believe that
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 scientific
research
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 may have produced some wrong outcomes, it is still an inseparable part of life. It has immense participation in the growth of the universe.

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coherence cohesion
Enhance the clarity of your main points by stating them more explicitly and concisely in the introduction. This will help set a clear roadmap for the reader.
task achievement
Address potential counterarguments or alternative viewpoints to strengthen your task response. This can also improve the depth of analysis.
introduction conclusion present
Your essay effectively introduces the topic and provides a balanced viewpoint by discussing both sides of the argument.
task achievement
You have successfully included specific examples, such as the COVID-19 vaccines, to support your arguments, showcasing relevance and specificity.
coherence cohesion
Main points are supported with appropriate examples, demonstrating your ability to back up claims with evidence.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • long-term benefits
  • advancements
  • unpredictable outcomes
  • high-risk field
  • significant breakthroughs
  • immediate benefit
  • financial drain
  • mismanaged funds
  • limited practical applications
  • public opinion
  • tangible results
  • spectacular successes
  • ethics
  • moral justification
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