Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Some

people

suggest that the most effective way to rectify

traffic

and

pollution

issues

is raising the

price

of

gasoline

. I totally agree with

this

idea, and

this

essay will point out other sensible solutions that can be incorporated with the measure of increasing the cost of

gasoline

. It is undeniable that air

pollution

and

traffic

congestion stem from

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heavy car usage as well as using

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petrol which

made

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from

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fossil fuel that

harmful

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are harmful

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for

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the environment.

Therefore

rising petrol

price

could be considered as one of

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methods to solve these problems. Since it will discourage

people

from using cars in order to save their money as they think that the

price

of

gasoline

is not reasonable. A recent study from the municipality in Toronto shows that when the city

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the

price

of

gasoline

, citizens use the car less and the rate of passengers of public

transportation

are significantly rising as well as the less carbon has been emitted according to the municipality’s tracking.

However

, there is another effective solution that can ameliorate

traffic

congestion and

pollution

by reducing the fares of public

transportation

to encourage

people

to use it as

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main vehicle to commute. If the fares of public

transportation

are quite affordable, it will attract numerous

people

to use

this

service

instead

of driving their own car which is the main cause of

traffic

and

pollution

issues

. One of the clearest examples is Japan where the cost of

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is inexpensive.

Hence

, their citizens commute by

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train as the main

transportation

.

Consequently

, Japan is the country

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produce the least

of

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carbon footprint in Asia. In conclusion, I will reiterate my stance that I completely agree with the notion of charging more on

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gasoline

is the most practical solution to solve the

issues

.

Nevertheless

, it can be applied with the measure of reducing the cost of public

transportation

in order to create

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sustainable solution for

traffic

and

pollution

issues

.