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In the modern world there is a movement away from written exams to more practical assessment. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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 students and workers in the educational system,
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, written
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 are the main way to examine people but in a few recent years, professors suggest written
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 should be a more practical assessment. At
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, some majors can not examine with written tests and we need varied qualifications too,
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, doctors must have some experience in the field of their work so you can not
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, we should consider alternative options like
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 problem-solving, oral presentation and work-based assessments.
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, one of the obvious disadvantages of written tests is that they do not suit everyone. In Italy, they use oral
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 to
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 their student's knowledge and switching
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 makes a big problem.
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, students used only written
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 to analysis their abilities will have problem with practical assessments.
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, we live in a fast-paced world, so written tests have some benefits, in some situations, we do not have enough time and opportunities
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 functioning in the real world involves making quick decisions,
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, it makes sense to analyse in the same way and written
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. In conclusion, our decisions depend on the type of majors in universities or companies policy even peoples culture, to have solidly written
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 or have a practical assessment.

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