Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy . which opinion do you agree with? discuss both view give examples.

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There is an increasing trend of children owning their own pets. Those who keep these pets do so mostly for companionship.
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, many people think
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is dangerous and unhealthy for children while others think
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trend is very important and an integral part of a child's development. In
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essay, both views will be discussed. On one hand, parents who allow their wards to keep pets do so to teach them responsibility and companionship.
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, children who have dogs have to take them on walks and care for them and in return,
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dogs serves as their friend.
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teaches them independence and good self-esteem knowing that they are responsible and loved regardless.
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, staying around animals can be good for the offspring's health as it prevents certain allergies. To
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end, I think animals may be best for a child's esteem and health.
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, these animals can be dangerous to health and life.
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, there are shreds of evidence of kids bitten by rabid canines, leading to loss of life, so
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, kissing infected companions. Because minors don't recognise when they are sick, they got close to them and endanger themselves.
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, it is best to keep toddlers away to keep safe. To conclude, having discussed both sides, it is obvious that they both have good reasons.
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, I support allowing one's baby to own a pet if they want. There are many advantages to it and one can not shield a child from every danger.
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