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Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#schools #children #internet #home
As technology has improved during
the
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recent years, it has eased life for humans dramatically in many aspects .It is argued that
children
 could get educated using internet technology
instead
 of going to
school
.I personally disagree with that and believe
schools
 play a significant role in
children
's education.
To begin
 with,I
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belive
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believe
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 that
schools
 are not the place just for learning lessons.
Children
 go to
schools
 and learn how to socialize, behave and get along with other people.In order to understand social relationships better, they need to see new people ,learn how to make friends ,communicate and cooperate with them.
This
 is a step that must take place out of the family environment.
In addition
 to that ,spending a couple of hours away from family each day, make them
to
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learn how to care for themselves when parents are not around and it gives
children
 the chance to learn how to survive without family's support and will gradually
leads
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 to build a
self confident
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 character,especially for those pampered ones. Another pertinent point is that
schools
is
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 the right place to improve
children
's discipline.Parents usually treat
children
 with compassion but
schools
 are more strict when they enforce a rule.There are lots of effective rules that
children
 are obliged to obey.
For instance
, being present at
school
 at a certain time every day or having some restrictions for clothing and so on.If
children
 learn to follow these rules at
school
, they probably learn easier how to obey rules in the family or later on in
the
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society. In conclusion, I definitely presume that every
children
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 must go to
school
eventhough
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even though
 learning through
internet
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the internet
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 is possible and accessible. It's not just lessons, but a lot more to be taught at
schools
.
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