Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Other however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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life expectancy is getting longer than before. A number of people hope that they have to look at their health condition on their own while other persons consider that the administration ought to control their diet. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides of view and suggest my opinion. I opine that people take care of their fitness has several reasons.

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with, they are likely to manage their appetite.

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, if they have a mind to control what is the bad effect on them, they might not gain weight or infect illness.

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, they have an idea to strict themselves, they can stay

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time in their life.

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opportunity

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to think about their physical.The person who has a high consensus about their body,

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cannot miss their bad condition. It can lead to

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horrible illness

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stage cancer.

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, the side of the government

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to provide for settlers keeping their physical has two benefits.

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of all, they might not pay extra costs for their food.

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, if the

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regularly supply for civilians to give

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healthy dishes, the settlers are able to

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money for their hobby

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of purchasing meals.

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, the citizen can pay a lot of

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government

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is because when people enjoy their life longer, they have to cost taxation their country. As for

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, the nation might have wealthy because of increasing taxpayers. To sum up, I prefer that they must check their recent condition themselves because they should duty to protect from worst disease and keep their better fitness.