Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter • remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was • thank them for the card and gift • explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

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Dear Sam and Tina, I am writing

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letter to express my gratitude

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the

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and

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that you sent on the occasion of my

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wedding anniversary. I celebrated my special day with my husband and close family members at home only. We did cake cutting and enjoyed delicious homemade food cooked by my mother. I would like to mention that one of the best parts of my anniversary was your surprising

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and

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. It made my day more special. I would like to heartedly thank you for the lovely

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and wonderful

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. I was amazed to see the apple

smartwatch

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which I wanted for a long time.

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, it has all the latest features like

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SpO2 monitoring, stress and heart monitor, sleep monitor and 5 ATM water resistance, calorie burns and many more. Now, it has become convenient for me to check my step count which will help me to monitor my everyday walking target. I feel some time restlessness.

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, I will get to know my Spo2 level and heart rate. Thank you again for the superb

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and awesome

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. Yours sincerely,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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6 paragraphs

189 words

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Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter • remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was • thank them for the card and gift • explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buy their houses. What are the advantages of renting a home? Should governments subsidies house prices for first home buyers?

In some contries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday? Do you ageree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

Some school children buy healthy food from the school cafeteria. However, some buy unhealthy food. What are the reasons for both these situations? Should schools be allowed to sell unhealthy food?