We have long imagined the possibility that life exists on other planets. Do you believe that there is life in the universe outside of earth? What would be the implications of proving that alien life exists? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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of
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being the only habitable planet in the
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was long believed to be true. Recently
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to the development of ,,
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there are
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of
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to expect alien
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from outside our planet. Some
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don’t believe
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others agree that we are not alone in the
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is closer to the former group. There are
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to think that we are the only creatures in the
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the fact that there were
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in science and technology
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we still haven’t found any evidence of any other
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is a good defence for
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contributed to searching for
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outside
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up with good evidence to prove it.
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the fact that not many
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talked about existence on other
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plays an influential role in these kinds of beliefs. There are a few
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that
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about aliens and
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on other
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Islam
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is one of those
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even in
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religion
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is not a direct mention of aliens. On the other
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are many
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to believe that alien
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exists. The
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of us being alone in
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a big
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is not likely. One of the
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is that we haven’t explored enough of our
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there is a lot to learn about. The statistical studies predict that there should be thousands of other
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in the
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which are habitable.
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there are many studies that prove
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on other
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in the solar system. To make it more
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we can talk about the form of bacteriuria in mercury or the artificial wave that was heard recently from one of the observatories of NASA. All in all, there are many debates on whether
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on other
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is possible. It seems that the fact that we are not alone in the
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is more likely to be true.

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