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Some people think that it is better to take part in team sports, while others believe that individual sports are better. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

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Some athletics need to be accomplished in a
team
 and some
people
 believe that it is more beneficial for participants, compared with individual
sports
. Personally,
people
 could get benefits from both kinds of
sports
, but in terms of friendship and communicational
skills
, I prefer
team
sports
.
Team
sports
 could help
people
 to improve their communication
skills
 and
team
-building
skills
. Different from individual
sports
,
team
sports
such
 as football, basketball and so forth are highly relying on teamwork. In
such
 cases, teammates could gradually know how to get along with each other, and how to express their thoughts exactly to improve the effectiveness of communication in the match. Simultaneously, it is easy for
people
 to make new friends in
team
sports
,
as a result
 of the same hobby and the highly understanding and trust of each other in a
team
.
For instance
, my brother usually tells me that he has made a lot of true friends in football clubs and the relationship between him and his teammates who fight together in various matches is more likely to be said as comrade-in-arms. Admittedly, I am not saying that personal
sports
 are good for nothing. Actually, it could enable
people
 to improve their concentration and self-discipline, without being disturbed by other
people
, but just focusing on sport. The fact that you don’t have teammates means that you have no choice but to keep the high motivation to perform. In conclusion, both two kinds of
sports
 are beneficial for individuals. While I understand individual
sports
 could bring some excellent personal characteristics,
however
, as far as the means of making friends and some
skills
 of teamwork and communication are considered, I agree with the view that
team
sports
 are more beneficial for
people
.
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