Some people think that children should be taught at school how to become good parents. Do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals are of the opinion that at schools
kids
must be educated on good parenting skills. I completely agree
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this
notion. I shall elaborate
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views in upcoming paragraphs. It is
very
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irrefutable fact
kids
who have suffered a harrowing
childhood
end up being a broken
adult
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, either they have low moral values or become addicted to violence and crime
therefore
, it is necessary that the
next
generation is protected from being victims of
such
disheartening
childhood
. If
kids
are taught about how good
parents
they can be in school,
this
can have a good impact on their life ahead as good
parents
instead
of easting away their life due to scared
childhood
.
In addition
to that, it is a known fact that children are a replica
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their
parents
. No man is perfect, even
parents
make mistakes in their parenting style and
kids
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tend to repeat the same mistakes with their
kids
.
This
could be avoided to a greater extend by teaching the
kids
the right method of parenting.
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there is no
such
proper method of parenting, it differs from one kid to another, some qualities or traditions that are being handed down could be eliminated.
For instance
, most Indian
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have the tendency to compare the grades of their children with others grades, without realising that they are affecting the self-esteem of the child by means of comparison. Introducing parenting skills as a subject in school could definitely encourage the
kids
to put
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end to
such
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in their homes in future. To sum up, it is ideal to teach
kids
the correct method of parenting from early years as
this
could protect their
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from being distressed due to their own
childhood
experiences.
This
could, to some extend, prevent the working parenting habits from being passed down to their younger ones as well.
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