Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the modern world,

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becomes part of everyday life. Learning is one of the activities that

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on

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innovation. Some individuals believe that

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should use online education

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of

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learning

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. The

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that method of studying will be totally substituted for

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is an

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both agreed

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disagreed with by many. The two sides of

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will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in

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essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

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, using

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as a tool for education,

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can obtain

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knowledge from everywhere all over the world. They can receive the information from several international educators while

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to

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technique limited

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one teacher at a time.

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is why it can be argued that e-learning can be considered for replacing the old way of teaching.

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, online education may lack sufficient control over the learners. To illustrate,

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method of learning can help

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focus on what they are learning especially in the youngsters. Attending

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to

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,

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need to take their

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seriously without playing around because they are thoroughly watched by their teachers.

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, when kids have any queries during the lesson, they can ask their educator immediately. Unfortunately, using

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cannot

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benefit.

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,

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makes it clear that traditional learning will never be totally substituted for

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. To summarise, the two sides of the

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concerning the prospect of innovation way of studying has strong supports.

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, after

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analysis of both sides, it is clear that the idea of studying completely by electronic communication cannot be supported. It is

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predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over

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-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of

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, confronting learning will never be substituted for

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