Some people say smacking children is the best way to discipline them. To what extent you agree with this?
It is
considerd
by some that beating young minds is an ideal method to make them follow rules and regulations. I completely agree with the given statement and there are two reasons why I think so and they will be explained in the Correct your spelling
considered
next
few paragraphs.
To begin
with, physical punishment
create
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creates
fearful
mind. It is a Correct article usage
a fearful
well known
fact that Add a hyphen
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chidren
who misbehave at their home and do not obey their elders are more Correct your spelling
children
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likely
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to become uncivilised in the future and Correct your spelling
likely
as a
result
it becomes inevitable for the parents to take harsh steps towards their behaviour. Add a comma
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For instance
, children studying in the hostel are more discipline as compared to people who have grown up at
their homes. Change preposition
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Therefore
, being physically strict is a good way to monitor a child's behaviour.
Secondly
, punishment
is a part of upbringing. Needless, to say that some form of punishment
given to an offspring is essential and is an integral part of good upbringing especially in this
modern era where controlling children from getting indulge in anti social
activities is somewhat difficult. To illustrate, if Add a hyphen
anti-social
child
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the child
a child
cought
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caught
red handed
while consuming contraband it is necessary to Add a hyphen
red-handed
severly
punish him in order to make him fully aware of Correct your spelling
severely
detrimental
effects of taking substance use. In short, giving Correct article usage
the detrimental
punishment
is certainly an ideal way to make a person mature and understanding.
In conclusion, I strongly affirm that rules and regulations are crucial to follow in life however
I also
believed that this
trait of discipline can only be achieved in children if they are smacked from
their elders.Change preposition
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