you have won first prize in our competition . The prize is a meal for two at the best restaurants in town. your evening begins at 7:00p.m when we will send a car to collect you and your guest. you will driven to the four Seasons restaurant and served with the delicious three course meal. write a letter in which you: Describe your evening and whyb you enjoyed it (or didn't enjoy it) comment on the quality of the meal and the service at theDear

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Dear friend, I am writing

this

letter to express my appreciation for the quality of services provided at the four seasons restaurant Hotel More ever , the food was tasty and liked by my family. Friday , I won

first

prize at four seasons restaurants. Our evening began at 7:00 pm,they sent us a car . we were driven to the restaurant . we arrived at the location on the night around 7:30 pm we had dinner served at 8:00pm. alking about food . it was delicious and liked by every one. Especially the chicken pizza was so tasty and completely well cooked. one thing I must say aboout the staff that they all are so cooperative and have a smile on their face, which admire us . I am really grateful to for seasons inn staff for making the night special and of course memorable . I will surely recommend that restaurant to my friend and my family. Best regards Lilian

Submitted by Liliansamir2000 on Sun Oct 17 2021

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