some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication.To what extend do you agree or diagree?

Communication
is
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of the most important habilities for a
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to develop in nature. Animals communicate in their own specific way to transmit any information as predators or food availability. For humans, technology has made
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it possible
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for us to communicate through different devices to continue our growth. Even though we can talk to a
person
on the other side of the globe now, written
communication
is never going to be as powerful as
face
to
face
communication
.
First
, when two people talk in
person
both can get a better understanding of what the topic is about and reply accurately. They can
also
interact after
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expressions, tone of voice and even feel the energy on which the
person
express
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himself.
Face
features are important too, some persons know how to read them and realize
wheter
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whether
what
a
person
is lying or not by the moves of their eyes or the position of their hands after saying something.
Scenary
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Scenery
is important as well to understand what the
person
is going through or according to the place, the amount of stress he is.
Second
, some might feel written contact as a distant and cold way to express something. The answer is not always
inmediatly
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immediately
immediate
and that causes
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of interest
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the topic.
Also
, as they are in different places, they will react under different
circunstances
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circumstances
like
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an hour
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hour
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of the day, weather, noise in the room.
This
can end up with both having different comprehension of what they are talking about and not get the right message.
Communication
make
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members of the
specie
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species
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get closer and share information, but we do not only communicate by words, we
also
need to feel the closeness to understand the feelings of another
person
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or
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of
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animal
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the animal
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Non-verbal cues
  • Body language
  • Facial expression
  • Tone of voice
  • Misunderstandings
  • Immediate feedback
  • Clarifications
  • Rapport
  • Documentation
  • Legal agreements
  • Formal communication
  • Tech-savvy
  • Virtual meetings
  • Messaging apps
  • Community
  • Connection
  • Professional settings
  • Sensitive information
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