Some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foreign country. Others think that they should live as a separate minority group with different lifestyles. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Over the
last
two or three decades, countless people have been moving to overseas nations due to better lifestyle
. some say that folks should be accepted new fashion when they move to another country, while Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
other
say that they should be lived as a particular minority group with various lifestyles, they do not change anything. In Correct pronoun usage
others
this
essay, I will discuss both views and will give my opinion finally
.
To begin
with, every country has an
unique Change the article
a
culture
, migirants
should be followed to their's Correct your spelling
migrants
tradition
when they are moving to ohter
parts of the world. If a person cannot accept their Correct your spelling
other
tradition
, he will be get
more depression and stress, Change the verb form
be getting
as a result
, this
can leads to getting isolation from that society. Taking Indians for example
, more and more folks move to an
Change the article
a
europe
state Change the capitalization
Europe
in
every year, that nation follows a western Change preposition
apply
culture
while Indians cannot accept to their's fashion, thus
, many get depression in order to sometimes has killed themselves. Therefore
, when a person moves to
abroad while she should be adopted a new Change preposition
apply
culture
.
On the other hand
, certainly, adopting a new culture
is a difficult task who the migirants
, they should be lived as a minority community public. Correct your spelling
migrants
In other words
, every person has their own tradition
and they follow many years so the migirants
should live what they are, Correct your spelling
migrants
thus
, their's own tradition
might be spread to all over the world. Taking Canada, for instance
, this
government has given a public holiday of Tamil former festival which is Pongal due to countless tamil
people are living and they are celebrated every year, Change the capitalization
Tamil
hence
this
is possible. Obviously, no one cannot change to their's root of culture
even they live in another
parts.
To conclude, moving Replace the adjective
other
to
the abroad is most popular Change preposition
apply
among
the world. Change preposition
in
Migirants
will be avoided stress and depression while they should adhereCorrect your spelling
Migrants
a
new Change preposition
to a
culture
, while they cannot change and they should live as a small community. However
, In my opinion, about this
, migirants
should not adopt a new Correct your spelling
migrants
culture
and they adhere to their own tradition
. I hope this
process is conducive to spreading their own tradition
to
all over the globe.Change preposition
apply
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