SPACE EXPLORATION IS MUCH TOO EXPENSIVE AND THE MONEY SHOULD BE SPENT ON MORE IMPORTANT THINGS.WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?

Space
exploration
is the physical
exploration
of outer
space
by human spaceflight and robotic spacecraft.
Space
study
needs
huge
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amount
of money and time for
this
research.
Therefore
,only
few
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countries do
space
investigation
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investigations
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. In my opinion,we should be more focused on humanitarians
problem
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problems
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on earth than
space
.
Firstly
,
Study
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of
space
is way much expensive than what
human
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humans
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think. It is often seen that it helps in
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the proxy
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competition of geopolitical rivalries
such
as
,
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cold war.
Moreover
,
space
survey not only
require
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money,
it
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but it also
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takes months and years as well.
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,
human
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humans
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get benefited by
space
examination in many ways,as healthcare,transportation,keeps our planet safe and secure and information technology,
on the other
hand
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all
these
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research required humongous
amount
& time for
this
study
.
Secondly
,people believe
its
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waste
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a waste
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of time and money in doing
space
exploration
.In recent
study
shows 30% of the people are below
poverty
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the poverty
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line. They don't have
personal
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a personal
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toilet
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toilets
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,
home
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a home
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and food to eat. Eventually,solving
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the problem
a problem
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problem
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problems
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on earth and putting at least 50% investigation
amount
in education,healthcare,and providing employment can lead to development.
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scenarios
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scenario
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in
covid
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the covid
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situation
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we should be more focused on
healthcare
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the healthcare
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and education system in order to save humans
,
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because once
human
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humans
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exist
space
exploration
is of no use. In conclusion,
space
study
is good in many ways but a fewer
amount
spend on
this
can help future generations.In my opinion,humanitarians problem must be taken on priority level on earth
then
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than
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space
.
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