There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir/Ma'am, I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to the frequency of
bus
timing on the route to Al Khail heights to
business
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bay. Every day
i
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travel from Al
khail
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Khalil
heights to Business bay for my work
in
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the
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bus
number F15.
This
has been my routine for 2 years now and
i
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never had any issues.
However
,
from
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past
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two weeks,
bus
' frequency has been reduced. Due to the fact that without any notice
bus
sometimes got
canceled
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end up with so much crowd and
i
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had to let go
couple
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of
bus
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to maintain the covid-19 requirements of distancing. Only two days a month
i
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can after the grace period
otherwise
my company cut my
half day
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pay for the late entry. I would really appreciate
if
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you look into
this
matter and have us the
bus
services like
that is
every 5
mintues
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minutes
on time. I am sure you have your reasons for
this
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inconveniency
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but please try to
reslove
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resolve
it as soon as you can. Thank you for your support in advance. Regards,
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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