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There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

#bus #service #reliability #area #two #weeks #manager #company
Dear Sir/Ma'am, I am writing
this
 letter to draw your attention to the frequency of
bus
 timing on the route to Al Khail heights to
business
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 bay. Every day
i
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 travel from Al
khail
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Khalil
 heights to Business bay for my work
in
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the
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bus
 number F15.
This
 has been my routine for 2 years now and
i
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 never had any issues.
However
,
from
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past
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the past
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 two weeks,
bus
' frequency has been reduced. Due to the fact that without any notice
bus
 sometimes got
canceled
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 end up with so much crowd and
i
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 had to let go
couple
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 of
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 to maintain the covid-19 requirements of distancing. Only two days a month
i
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 can after the grace period
otherwise
 my company cut my
half day
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 pay for the late entry. I would really appreciate
if
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 you look into
this
 matter and have us the
bus
 services like
that is
 every 5
mintues
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minutes
 on time. I am sure you have your reasons for
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inconvenience
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inconveniency
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inconvenience
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 but please try to
reslove
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resolve
 it as soon as you can. Thank you for your support in advance. Regards,
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal
Submitted by brijal_desai on

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