You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group does explain why the group is good for the community suggest alternative days and times for practice

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Dear Manager, I am writing
this
letter to ask your permission to let us continue our music
practice
in the community hall. I am Brijal and
i
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am part of the music group name Evil Band. Till now we have been
practicing
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in the hall on Tuesday and Friday.
However
, today we got a notice that we can't continue our
practice
there anymore.
That is
the only place where we can
practice
for our weekly
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fund raising
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concert which is basically very helpful to the community for its betterment. We as a group, with our weekly music
play
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collects 30000 monthly and donate the money to the school,
orphan age
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and age care facilities. We are ready to change our schedules and we will come to
practice
at your given time and days. I would appreciate your consideration. Thank you. Yours Sincerely,
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal
Desai
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