The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and sea. What are the reasons and solutions?

In the 21st century, an increasing number of people inhabiting

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planet along with their

activities

have caused biodiversity loss, driving the extinction of many animal species. It is believed that

deforestation

and pollution are the main culprits behind

this

phenomenon.

However

,

government

interventions could contribute to mitigating

this

recent situation. It is understandable that why logging is blamed for the vulnerability to the extinction of some wildlife. As the overgrowing population, human demands for land and other natural resources to serve daily and production

activities

rise

accordingly

. To give a clear example, every year, for the sake of earning more money, people resort to massive

deforestation

, which destroys the habitats of animals. Without living spaces, the disappearance of some wild animals is inevitable. Another reason worth mentioning is the increasing levels of pollution on land and under the sea due to the heavy chemical disposal from factories.

For instance

, the discharge of toxic industrial waste of a steel plant has resulted in fish and marine creature deaths in the middle part of Vietnam. Certain creatures die out when living in contaminated waters and the affected ecosystem may require a few years to recover. In order to holistically address the aforementioned problems, the

government

should take actions to preserve animal life.

First

and foremost, it is imperative to take drastic measures to outlaw

deforestation

for any purpose. Forests should

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as national parks,

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and

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involved in cutting trees down will be punished severely.

In

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to mitigate

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situation,

national

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government

need to introduce more stringent regulations on industrial

activities

. To exemplify, a factory could be permanently banned if

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waste discharge is detected. These two solutions would be effective in the long run to halt harmful human

activities

to the environment as well as the land and marine areas. In conclusion, I contend that for personal benefits, people are overlooking the importance of animal life.

Although

human has put a lot of poisoned waste affecting the animal wildlife, the

government

could tackle

this

issue by enacting stricter laws against

deforestation

and environmental contamination.