Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession. What factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion should be done about it?

These days, a high rate of unemployment among the youths who have just graduated from

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universities is a major concern in many countries. In the following paragraphs, the cause of an increase in a jobless rate among

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, and some sensible remedies will be explored in detail.

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university

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graduates

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do not have enough

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job

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to reach the

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's qualification since most

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prestigious

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companies

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prefer to recruit

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persons who have at least 3 years

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experience

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doing the relevant jobs.

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, it is impossible to have

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job

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experience

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after graduation.

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, the young generation

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to work in

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famous

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such

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as SCG, Google, Facebook, and so on that pay high salaries, which those

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always

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position in a highly competitive.

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, only a few people get recruited and a vast majority of applicants are still unemployed.

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attempt to alleviate the aforementioned consequences and promote

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recruitment, the authority should organize

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fairs and develop the searching

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website in order to

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the requirement of the

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and the

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.

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, a million

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by the search engine called Jobbkk.com, which allow everyone to post their

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background

of education and a

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experience

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their website to enable the

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to find the right persons who suitably work with them.

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, the educational authority should emphasize

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enhancing

an internship programs

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internship programs

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as it is

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good chance for students to try working in the desire jobs, which can be their primary jobs in the future. In conclusion, according to the information mentioned above, it can

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that the drastic increase in

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graduate

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being jobless is attributed to lack of

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job

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experience

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and

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of the recent youth.

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, it can be ameliorated by the action of the authority including developing the career search engine and improve the internship aspect.