“Do you think extra-curricular activities are important in a student’s life?” Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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regular academics should be encouraged in children from an early stage and should form an essential part of their lives. I am a firm believer of

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since each and every individual should be able to enjoy something they like apart from their daily routine. We shall be discussing

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To begin

with, sports can be considered as a form of extra-

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where one can play it for fitness as well as to pursue it as a career option. encouraging children to take up a sport from

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stage will help them stay physically fit and healthy,

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swimming, football, etc have been proved to help lose weight.

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from a career prospect, sports have tremendously helped people succeed and earn more than average corporate jobs.

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activity that can be looked upon. it has become very common and most followed passion nowadays amongst youngsters as they have been an audience to various artists that have

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fame and wealth due to music or dance. with so many popular shows coming

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example, Indian Idol or Dance India Dance, kids get encouraged to take up performing arts as a hobby and hone them. To sum up, I would again like to emphasize that extra-

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activities are very important in a student's life as they help them explore their other potential beyond academics and gives them a platform to showcase their talents.