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Some students tend to travel after finishing school and spend time working somewhere instead of going to the university directly. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is seen that nowadays pupils engage themselves in working environment at
very
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 early age, sometimes even before stepping into an institution.
This
 kind of trend certainly put
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unncecessary
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 burden and often prohibits
students
 to explore other fields.
However
, it
also
 has its upsides like
development
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 of skills and gives
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practical knowledge and experience.
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 and the most drawback following
this
 pattern is that it leaves
students
 with
unecessary
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unnecessary
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 exertion and burden as
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work load
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.
Moreover
, it is based on certain principles which every employee has to abide by; which may bring anxiety and unbearable stress in the minds of freshers.
In addition
 to that indulging themselves
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 work early will eventually deprive them
from
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 exploring other areas
besides
 academics. For eg: My cousin Anamika started working as an intern just after her 12th Board examination and later she realised that she
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 backed up with loads of work due to
this
 fact she barely get a chance to explore and follow her passion.
Hence
, it has its certain implications like long working hours which can easily disturb
students
 life. Along with demerits, it has its certain positive points as it gives an opportunity to experiment with jobs and
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 to re-invent themselves. To elaborate
this
, as after completing higher studies
students
 are unaware
about
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 the courses, so, it gives them practical knowledge and helps them to figure out what excites them most.
Furthermore
, it
also
 gives them financial freedom at a very young age, which eventually
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 up their morale and confidence level.
Hence
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 it posses
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 impact as it enables them to get a competitive edge over other
students
. To conclude, one should jump into working
atmostphere
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atmosphere
 as it helps in career planning and professional growth whereas it should be limited to
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 extent only so that
students
 are not burdened by long working hours and should be able to enjoy other fields
also
.
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