You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: – Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired – Your energy and enthusiasm for the job – Your past experience in a similar position.

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Dear Madam/Sir, I am writing to apply for the position of flight attendant that you advertised on social networks

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week. As far as I am really interested in working with people and

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very fond of aeroplanes and their structure, I am deeply willing to apply for

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position. Please find my CV which is attached to

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email. Currently, I have been working at Ryan Air since 2015 , but as your company is one of the pioneering companies in the world I would like to experience working with it.

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my background in hospitality and familiarity with

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sector of aviation, I will be more successful if I get accepted in the interview and other exams. I am a very motivated person and accustomed to irregular jobs

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as waking up early in the morning or working throughout the night. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon and thank you in advance for considering my resume. yours sincerely, Keyhan Ebrahimi

Submitted by keyhan454 on Sat Mar 30 2024

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Task Achievement

Expand on how your skills and experiences specifically align with the job requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

Consider using more varied sentence structures to enhance readability.

Task Achievement

You've clearly expressed your enthusiasm and motivation for the role.

Coherence & Cohesion

Appropriate greeting and closing were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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