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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Globalization had changed everything, and
educational
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 field hadn't been untouched. In earlier times,
students
 used to receive their
education
 in
home
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their home
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 countries , whereas now,
students
 prefer to study overseas. Undoubtedly,
this
 trend has more advantages than disadvantages.
First
 and foremost, studying abroad led
students
 to gain that part of
education
 , which is not available in their own
country
. Notable, every nationality
have
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 its unique
education
 system which is the backbone of that
country
's development, so
this
 type of learning would make
students
 more efficient and successful. Adding to it, studying out of
country
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 makes
students
 self-dependent , because all the uncountable services that
students
 used to have
it
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apply
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done from parents are now completely
upto
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up to
 them,
for example
: cooking, financial, and other household chores.
Next
 , foreign
education
 has always been considered an asset when it comes to a job opportunity,
accordingly
, after completing
education
 whenever
students
 fetch for
job
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a job
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 in their native
country
 they tend to have
more
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better placement. Looking at
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the other
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other
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 side, staying far as abroad tend to make
students
 homesick and lonely, recently I've heard about many
students
 who dropped off their previous
education
 and came back , which is sad because studying abroad is not cheap . Concluding, foreign
education
 indeed is a lucrative option , but have some considerable drawbacks as well.
Students
 and parents should be well prepared before taking up
such
 decisions.
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