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Some people think that living in city can be stressful. Do you agree or disagree?

Many students take a
gap
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year
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 before they are going to have tertiary
education
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. They claim that a
gap
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year
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 helps to empty their mind and preparing them
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 a great journey at universities,
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, I disagree with it.
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, life is too short and we don’t have enough time
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 nowadays, we perspective a competitive situation in our
education
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 system so a
gap
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year
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 put you in really hard level so if you want to take a
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year
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, you must work harder than you expected.
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, sociologists claim that a
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year
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 may change students minds to have a higher level of
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 because They have been away from studying and they lose their motivation to follow an academic
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,
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 there is a big question which is how they spend their time in the
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year
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, the results indicate us most of them waste their time and spend lots of money on entertainment, food and travelling and the main issue is they don't have any particular studying about a
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.
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, there is a small per cent of students say that they study in varied fields to prepare themself for universities. In conclusion, there is no doubt that having a
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year
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 between high school and college is not an appropriate decision to make even though, in very special cases can help to improve some student's literacy and they going to be more active at universities so it is better to follow your
education
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 rapidly.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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