Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Today, many environmental issues are being left unsolved so that they are said to might be solved by technology.
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, some people disagree and others agree with
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statement. Personally, I think Artificial Intelligence may not find the answers to the problems globe facing.
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of all, nowadays computers are making individuals' life facilitative with
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countless inventions and
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being said that in the future they will expose new inventions for natural and humankind outcomes. Because their exceptional, intellectual and growing ability have found plenty of discoveries, which are advantageous for people nowadays.
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, electronic vehicles do not spread harmful emissions like cars running with petrol.
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we did not even imagine
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cars that can be driven by
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now we have
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ones.
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, we do not know exactly
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what
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Artificial intelligence can be capable
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I assert machines will not be capable of solving environmental issues due to their absence of sense. Human beings highly hinge on computers in recent days since they contriving various inventions in succession.
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, it does not mean they are able to work off problems of
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.
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, there are many robots created by genius inventors, but they do not feel.
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, challenges happening around
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cannot be discussed by mechanics which actually are managed by
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. Even though technology has alleviated our life, it does not mean they can solve the issues of our world because of their limited skills
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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