Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

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In other to reach an unbiased judgement and ensure the protection of a
defendant
, British and Australian laws restrict a
jury
's access to the accused's
records
in a criminal
case
.
However
, several lawyers are proposing an amendment to
this
law so that a
jury
has rights to the
defendants
past criminal
records
. In my opinion, I agree with the proposal, a
jury
should be able to review a
defendant
's
records
before meting out their judgement.
To begin
with, concerning the argument about a biased judgement,
this
may be possible if the
jury
is an individual alone or if it comprises of only a particular gender, age group, race or religion.
This
however
is not the
case
as a standard
jury
is diverse, with at least 10 or 12 qualified jurors of both genders and more than one age group who are required by the law to put aside their racial or religious differences during a trial.
Therefore
, it is unlikely that all members of the
jury
will become biased after viewing the
defendant
's
records
, or that the
jury
will give a verdict based on the bias of 2 or 3 jurors.
Furthermore
, I believe that for the appropriate verdict to be given, the nature of the offence
in addition
to whether or not the offender is a
first
-timer or a repeat offender should be taken into consideration. Since the
case
is a criminal
case
, it is likely that the crime in question may have caused death or harm to a
third
party, damage to property or the state and would require a heavy
punishment
.
However
, if the
defendant
is a
first
-timer, the
punishment
may be relatively lighter (all things being equal) than what a repeat offender will receive, and the
jury
needs to have
this
information in other to give the
punishment
of deserving weight.
For instance
, it will be inadequate and a bit unfair to ask a repeat shoplifter to simply pay a fine (which is more appropriate for a
first
-timer) when they deserve jail time. But
this
may be the
case
if the
jury
is kept in the dark with regards to the record.
Also
, looking through a
defendant
's record may bring to light certain things relating to the current
case
that
otherwise
may have been overlooked.
For instance
, after analyzing the
defendants
criminal record, it may become evident that they require some psychological or psychiatric intervention, based on the nature and pattern of the previous and current crimes. With
this
information, the verdict can be tailored to deliver not just judicatory
punishment
but
also
a solution to their mental health illness in form of rehabilitation, counselling or where necessary placed on appropriate medication. In conclusion, even though there may be concerns about a
jury
dishing out biased verdicts to
defendants
after going through their
records
, revealing these
records
indeed has more advantages as it makes room for not just the most appropriate weighted punishments, as in the
case
of repeat offenders, as well as factoring in other forms of help and rehabilitation for
defendants
who may need it.
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