You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir/Ma'am,
I am writing
this
letter to inquire about the immigration seminar that will be held in Canada next
month.
I am working as an immigration processing officer and i
would like to attend Change the capitalization
I
this
imigration
related session which you are going to organize where there will be given tips and tricks by David Cohen. It will help Correct your spelling
immigration
emigration
excel
Correct pronoun usage
me excel
my
career path.
I have Change preposition
in my
only
Add an article
an only
overview
of Correct article usage
an overview
this
seminar and I would like to know the starting date and length of the program in order to apply for my visa and leave application to the work. If you can also
recommend me a couple of afforadble
hotels close to the venue with approximate price Correct your spelling
affordable
please
. Would you Add a comma
,please
also
highlight what types of other programs will be included and by whome
Correct your spelling
whom
it
will be addressed?
Thank you for your help and guidance in advance.
I look forward Correct pronoun usage
they
attending
Change preposition
to attending
this
seminar.
Regards,
Brijal
DesaiCorrect your spelling
Bridal
Brinjal
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite