You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Dear Sir/Ma'am, I am writing
this
letter to inquire about the immigration seminar that will be held in Canada
next
month. I am working as an immigration processing officer and
i
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would like to attend
this
imigration
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immigration
emigration
related session which you are going to organize where there will be given tips and tricks by David Cohen. It will help
excel
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me excel
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my
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in my
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career path. I have
only
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overview
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an overview
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of
this
seminar and I would like to know the starting date and length of the program in order to apply for my visa and leave application to the work. If you can
also
recommend me a couple of
afforadble
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affordable
hotels close to the venue with approximate price
please
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. Would you
also
highlight what types of other programs will be included and by
whome
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whom
it
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they
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will be addressed? Thank you for your help and guidance in advance. I look forward
attending
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this
seminar. Regards,
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal
Desai
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Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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