Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest
Nowadays, a tendency to do jobs while studying is rising which is undeniable that leads to negative effects. There are some causes for
this
situation and the various measures can take a step to solve.
There are two main reasons why students
these days have tended to hold both of them simultaneously. Firstly
, some impoverished children have no choice to work during their studying period in order to pay tuition fee
, uniforms or even stationery. Fix the agreement mistake
fees
For example
, in Thailand, lots of deadvantaged
kids who want to go in higher education Correct your spelling
disadvantaged
such
as undergraduate and postgraduate degrees, have been doing part-time jobs while they are students
as a highly unreasonable price of tuition fee. Secondly
, the working skills that students
learnt from being employed can help them to have higher oppotunities
to be recruited in the future. In doing so, the absence of school or university and lack of learning hours can be insoluble problems.
Correct your spelling
opportunities
However
, these factors can be addressed by the
governments and institutions. The Correct article usage
apply
first
contributing is the government can play an essential part in encouraging youngsters by subsidizing institutions to be free and accessible for everyone, leading citizens to enable access education
no matter what social status they are. Change preposition
to education
For instance
, the authorities of Germany have been applying the legislation of free access policy towards all domestic institutions, as a result
, many students
have performed well in performances either at school or college. Another solution is that every educational place should add pragmatic lessons to teach their kids to have important skills, especially in this
competitive world, as well as have the connection with various firms that would recruit graduates after finishing courses. consequently
, it is not only beneficial regarding youths but also
reduce
the increasing rate of unemployed graduates.
In Change the verb form
reduces
conclusion
there are a variety of methods to tackle the problems caused by the lack of money and crucial skills in Add a comma
,conclusion
workplace
which adversely affect Correct article usage
the workplace
students
to concentrate on their studying
.Replace the word
studies
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