Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.

Economical growth is the main key for the improvement of countries whose
governments
supported them more.
However
, it is believed by some
people
that progressing in different types of fields must support at the same level. I'm on the latter side and
this
is essay discussed both sides. On the one hand, economic growth should be the main important goal of
governments
.
Moreover
, when
people
have a lifestyle without any concern about the level of their income, it converts them into a wealthy country.
For example
, they can be passed their
first
priorities as buying food and clothes and attending to their secondary needs like health and spending time for exercise, in opposite to some poor countries in Africa.
On the other hand
, circumstances that encourage
people
to improve themselves is equally important.
Firstly
, if
people
learn how they can make a good treatment with each other it will bring the high-quality culture and
people
help to their
governments
to have more progress in the economy.
For example
,
people
can support indoor industrial by buying their products.
Secondly
, types like social life and education are those fields that are related to economic growth
in contrast
to the view of those who think only numbers are important for government.
For instance
, the Central Bank of Iran sometimes manipulates the inflation rate, while the reality is different and
people
have a poor life. In conclusion,
although
the
governments
must be aware of their economical state as the main goal, it is important that they support
people
as well as other fields like social life and culture to form better economic conditions. I hope it will happen over the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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