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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages

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People argue that driverless transportation will be the best way for humans to travel in the future. In my perception of view, the advantages will outweigh the disadvantages. In
this
 essay, I will highlight some of them and outline the ramifications
regarding
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this
 issue.   
Firstly
, motor vehicles without drivers will be inevitable in the era of advanced technology. Robots will sweep the workplace, especially the transportation media.
As a result
, artificial intelligence will become more  predominant.There will be many merits to
this
 widespread use.
As a result
, road accidents will decrease dramatically. Because artificial intelligence will be less vulnerable to errors that drivers may commit due to distraction or illness.
As a result
, road accidents will decrease considerably.
Consequently
, human
lives
 can be saved.
Therefore
, pros will overcome cones. 
Secondly
, it is human nature that exhibits drawbacks. Human beings are prone to many health problems which may affect concentration.
Besides
 that, distraction because of the use of mobile phones while driving leads to catastrophic effects and endangers individual
lives
. Because of that, a lot of people lose their
lives
 due to collisions.
For instance
, researchers in the
last
 year showed that 50% of road accidents were caused by individuals texting or calling while driving.
Apponents
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Opponents
 of
this
 legislation will be of the opinion that people may lose their jobs,
thus
 ending up homeless and in poverty. In conclusion, it is clear that autonomous vehicles
such
 as cars, buses, and trucks will lead to better transportation as well as save
lives
.In spite of
this
, human beings will suffer from unemployment and poverty.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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