In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement

There is no doubt that the
internet
has changed the way we execute our work and its results
especially
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online
activitiess
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activities
. Some individuals argue that in future, no one will purchase paper books, gazettes and magazines because the trend of studying
news
online is spreading among
masses
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. I completely agree with the view that online reading of articles and ebooks showing
upward
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trend and are widely accepted and recommended by many individuals. On the one hand, Online reading of eBooks, magazines and brochures are quite easily accessible and downloadable. Many different types of
information
like daily happening around the nation and the world, companies and brands
information
, can be available with a click of
button
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of
mouse
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.
Moreover
, the
news
agencies like
times
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of new York, Washington times will update the content and
information
available on their websites immediately in
real time
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. So, that
it
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visitors can know the latest
information
, which
are
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easy to download and can be watched later.
In a
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recent survey, conducted by
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the university
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university
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of California, states the General public interest to view
information
online, for different
contents
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content
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has increased by almost 30% compared to 3 years earlier.
On the other hand
, Online
news
access
requires an electronic
gadget
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gadgets
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like
Smartphone
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smartphones
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,
tablets
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and Laptops with
access
to
internet
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the internet
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and
long lasting
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battery. If a Smartphone is not properly charged or don’t have fast
access
to
internet
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,
then
one cannot get updated online
information
available on websites. Whereas,
newspaper
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and books don’t require any sort of network connectivity and energy source to remain connected with
information
.
Consequently
, readers of
internet
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especially elders and senior citizens, those who are not aware of technology, may find it difficult to use.
Hence
, Online reading of
news
and ebooks has
lot
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of limitations in terms of
access
to
news
and
information
.
Hence
, I Conclude, that though Online
stuying
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studying
of
news
articles and magazines is on
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rise
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,
nevertheless
, it has caused many hurdles related to proper network connectivity and energy source, whereas
newspaper
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and books are very easy to
access
and can be read easily to any generation of people from senior citizens, to children
also
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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