Some people think that increasing the cost of fuel is one of the best ways to solve environmental problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion？

It is true that the crowd of

cars

has increased substantially especially during the

last

three decades and it

is blame

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for heavy traffic in

suburb

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areas,

obviously

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some measurements should be taken into consideration by

government

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the government

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.

This

is the main subject of

debates

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in

development

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developing

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countries.

Over using

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of

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apply

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private

cars

has got many consequences

such

as traffic, air and noise pollution. Nowadays we can see more

cars

in the streets

compare

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to the past which put some negative effects on individual

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lives

life

lifes

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and nature.

Emission

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The emission

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of carbon-dioxide

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carbon-dioxide

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carbon dioxide

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from vehicles provide several health issues

such

as asthma. According to some data which

taken

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are taken

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from articles, longevity in the latest century has been decreased in

crowd

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cities where people have spent more hours in

teraffic

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traffic

jam and they are more likely to become angry easily. It is controversial

problem

and I believe that some ways should

taken

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by

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government

govenrment

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the govenrment

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for motivating the population to use

less

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fewer

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cars

. There are enormous solutions for

this

significant

problem

.

Firstly

,

offer

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some discount on public transportation will be useful. Tokyo

encourage

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workers to use buses with free tickets

in

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on

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specific days.

Second

, investing money

on

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environmentally friendly

cars

or even bikes would be another possible solution, Netherland spread more than 200000 bicycles in their towns and several videos are created by producers to raise public awareness about

positive

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results of using bikes

instead

of

cars

.

Finally

, If engineers construct wider roads, the

problem

of traffic will decrease but we still will have air pollution in our cities,

thus

I think it would not be the best solution for

this

issue. To conclude,

over

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number

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of

cars

is the main

problem

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in

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is

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some areas.

Although

several factors are lead to

this

problem

, serious measures should be taken by governments.