Some people think that watching sports is wastage during leisure time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days people from diverse backgrounds and varying ages are keen
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spectating athletics during their free
time
as a relaxation method.
Moreover
, there are a plethora of options
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with in
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sports
that can be watched
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the comfort
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one's house. In my opinion, I partially agree
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the given statement due to the fact that
though
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sports
is a mode of entertainment if not limited it leads to wastage of extremely precious
time
.
To begin
with,
sports
do develop thinking capabilities in individuals as they would be required to anticipate opponents moves.
In addition
,
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spectating would
also
try to do the same thing.
As a result
, watching alone imparts few skills.
Next
, kids watch their favourite player
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TV and get motivated.
This
inspires them to work even harder to reach their goals.
Moreover
, during
trainings
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, trainees are made to watch
sports
in order to understand newer tackling skills and game tactics as well. Afterwards,
this
would make significant changes in their
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and raise the probability of winning.
For instance
, Sachin was fascinated by cricket right from his childhood and played a lot.
Consequently
, he
binge watched
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all the matches and created his own strategies which aided him in paving
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to his professional carrier and made him the most admirable figure in the world today.
On the other hand
,
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continuously is a
time
killer.
Firstly
, children do get lost
of
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their
time
when streaming
such
activities. Hereafter, it would make
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drop in their studies as they would be spending more
time
on it.
Secondly
,
thesedays
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these days
, new apps have been popped up regarding betting on cricket matches online.
This
further
made kids more inclined towards cricket and
also
made them
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stake money at very high risk. Ultimately, making them lose that money.
For example
, I have seen my juniors in college who were very exemplary in studies during
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year but began obtaining
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scores in their sophomore year as they were introduced to these apps.
Thus
, leading them towards
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. To conclude, there are quite a number of options to get entertained and
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stake of people prefer streaming athletic events over rest.
However
, if not managed properly rather than getting to learn something new
this
would make them lose what they already have.
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