Some people think that watching sports is wastage during leisure time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days people from diverse backgrounds and varying ages are keen
in
spectating athletics during their free Change preposition
on
time
as a relaxation method. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there are a plethora of options Linking Words
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apply
with in
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within
sports
that can be watched Use synonyms
at
the comfort Change preposition
in
from
one's house. In my opinion, I partially agree Change preposition
of
to
the given statement due to the fact that Change preposition
with
though
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through
sports
is a mode of entertainment if not limited it leads to wastage of extremely precious Use synonyms
time
.
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To begin
with, Linking Words
sports
do develop thinking capabilities in individuals as they would be required to anticipate opponents moves. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
person
spectating would Correct article usage
a person
also
try to do the same thing. Linking Words
As a result
, watching alone imparts few skills. Linking Words
Next
, kids watch their favourite player Linking Words
in
TV and get motivated. Change preposition
on
This
inspires them to work even harder to reach their goals. Linking Words
Moreover
, during Linking Words
trainings
, trainees are made to watch Change the wording
training
pieces of training
sports
in order to understand newer tackling skills and game tactics as well. Afterwards, Use synonyms
this
would make significant changes in their Linking Words
game play
and raise the probability of winning. Correct your spelling
gameplay
For instance
, Sachin was fascinated by cricket right from his childhood and played a lot. Linking Words
Consequently
, he Linking Words
binge watched
all the matches and created his own strategies which aided him in paving Add a hyphen
binge-watched
path
to his professional carrier and made him the most admirable figure in the world today.
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the path
a path
On the other hand
, Linking Words
binge watching
continuously is a Add a hyphen
binge-watching
time
killer. Use synonyms
Firstly
, children do get lost Linking Words
of
their Change preposition
in
time
when streaming Use synonyms
such
activities. Hereafter, it would make Linking Words
drastic
drop in their studies as they would be spending more Correct article usage
a drastic
time
on it. Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
thesedays
, new apps have been popped up regarding betting on cricket matches online. Correct your spelling
these days
This
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further
made kids more inclined towards cricket and Linking Words
also
made them Linking Words
to
stake money at very high risk. Ultimately, making them lose that money. Change the verb form
apply
For example
, I have seen my juniors in college who were very exemplary in studies during Linking Words
junior
year but began obtaining Add an article
the junior
worst
scores in their sophomore year as they were introduced to these apps. Correct article usage
the worst
Thus
, leading them towards Linking Words
self destruction
.
To conclude, there are quite a number of options to get entertained and Add a hyphen
self-destruction
major
stake of people prefer streaming athletic events over rest. Correct article usage
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However
, if not managed properly rather than getting to learn something new Linking Words
this
would make them lose what they already have.Linking Words
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