Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the highly controversial issues today relates to the high technology in
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education. Nowadays, the
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item in the world. The educational system provided it into the class to teach
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for children. Whereas it might make a few fear for students. In
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will explain both sides of
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and suggest my opinion.
To begin
with, using
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classroom
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has two merits. It is clear that children can do studying
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their own speed. If the teaching style which
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from their teachers, learners should follow that speed whatever they do not
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understand
.
However
, when they use their own
computer
, they are able to study on themselves and they
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not matter other's
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acceleration
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, teachers
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likely to look at pupils.
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. Whereas it is impossible to take care of all pupils and all time. As the result, bringing
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could be more
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on individuals safety and
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.
On the other hand
, it has several drawbacks to
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a computer
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.
First
of all, it is bad for their
eye
health.
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is because that screen always exposes the blue lights. It makes our
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bad.
For instance
, they might be certain
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or infect some
eye
problems.
Moreover
, they may not tend to communicate with other students because they concentrate on their devices and the
computer
can show the answer without asking the question to their friends. To sum up, utilizing
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in
education
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system has some pros and cons. In my opinion, it has a lot of benefits to introduce it in the school.
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