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some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are tge advantages and disadvantages of a family run business?

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There is an ongoing debate concerning family-run businesses and whether they pose benefits or drawbacks within a family. In
this
 essay, we shall discuss
this
 matter and come up with a conclusion. Well, for starters, let us look at the advantages of having a family-run
business
. The
first
 pro to be mentioned is that it offers flexibility, with everyone knowing their respective roles, which helps the
business
 to run smoothly.
In addition
, as it is a family-run company, the
business
 can be operated at the convenience of the staff.
Secondly
, most family businesses are passed on in the family, which means that they are always financially sound, and no cost has to be invested in employee fees.
For example
, when I was growing up in Dubai, we used to buy vegetables from a particular group of grocers, and when we
last
 visited them in 2017, these individuals were about to retire and they were teaching their sons and nephews how to run the store.
On the other hand
, these organisations do have their own set of drawbacks. One of which would be, a lack of family interest, because whilst the parents invest their time in the shops, the children will be studying, and the
further
 they study, they will realise there are more options for them outside than just working in a shop.
Therefore
, if a clear structure is built, and there is proper succession planning, members will commit more to the idea of passing on the shop.
Lastly
, like in every family, there is always a chance of family disputes, and with an own
business
, the possibilities of
this
 are greater. In conclusion,
although
 family-run businesses are very popular with many of the older generations,
this
 idea tends to face stiff opposition from the younger generation, as they feel that there are more options available to them now.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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