In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problem as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

In some countries around the world , they are facing ample of health diseases due to unhealthy and unbalanced
life
. For that reason, some individuals believe that
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with the help of the
government
this
problem can be solved. I partially agree with
this
notion. In , the forthcoming essay I will explain some reasons regarding
this
statement. To commence with, undoubtedly in the contemporary era
people
are leading the busiest
life
,
thus
, they do not have time for making
food
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, folks do not have enough time to cook three times meals. So ,
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the dependency on cane
food
is increased because
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it is
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the stomach.
For example
, 65% of
people
of the world are middle class, if the
government
impose taxes on the consumption of pre-processed
food
as a result
, they living cost will be increased and they are suffering most for
this
decision.
However
,
on the other hand
, to tackle
this
issue the state should launch
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awareness campaign in social media and in schools about the dangerous effects of fast
food
.
Firstly
, the
government
should encourage and motivate communities to eat more green and
also
attain some physical exercise.
For instance
, in Japan
people
are leading a healthy lifestyle and their
life
expectancy is
also
long, these changes took place only for public awareness.
Moreover
,
government
impose taxes on some
food
substances which are frequently used in fast
food
and
also
contains harmful chemicals.
As a result
,
people
can develop some contiguous diseases like
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cancer. To conclude, as
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individual I think imposing taxes on fast
food
just added a burden on a person
life
. We need to demotivate consumers for consumption.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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