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Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

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Dear
Mr.
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 Aseem, I am writing
this
 letter to ask your permission to give a
presentation
 about new
immigration
 policies. As you must know that I had attended David Cohen's
Immigration
 conference in Canada
last
 week and I have learned useful
informations
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information
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 from that seminar which I would like to present
it
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apply
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to the
immigration
procesing
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processing
 officers who
couldnt
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couldn't
able
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 to join
with
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me there. The
presentation
 will
be comprises
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 of the new
immigration
 rules for skilled workers and how they can approach the designated employers in Canada from
the
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overseas. It would
also
breif
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brief
be if
 the procedure about how to
tie-up
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 with the genuine companies who
recruite
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recruit
recruited
recruits
 from
the
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outside Canada.
Besides
,
processing
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 department, I want
Sales
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a Sales
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 team to participate in
this
one hour
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presentation
 to understand the process that how we are going to enhance our services to get a client a suitable job offer. Since I am thinking to present
this
 idea through ppt,
conference
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the conference
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 room would be
the
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perfect for the
presentation
. I appreciate for considering my plan. Thank You. Yours sincerely,
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal
 Desai
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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