Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

Dear
Mr.
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Aseem, I am writing
this
letter to ask your permission to give a
presentation
about new
immigration
policies. As you must know that I had attended David Cohen's
Immigration
conference in Canada
last
week and I have learned useful
informations
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information
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from that seminar which I would like to present
it
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to the
immigration
procesing
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processing
officers who
couldnt
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couldn't
able
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to join
with
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me there. The
presentation
will
be comprises
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of the new
immigration
rules for skilled workers and how they can approach the designated employers in Canada from
the
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overseas. It would
also
breif
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brief
be if
the procedure about how to
tie-up
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with the genuine companies who
recruite
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recruit
recruited
recruits
from
the
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outside Canada.
Besides
,
processing
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department, I want
Sales
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a Sales
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team to participate in
this
one hour
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presentation
to understand the process that how we are going to enhance our services to get a client a suitable job offer. Since I am thinking to present
this
idea through ppt,
conference
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the conference
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room would be
the
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perfect for the
presentation
. I appreciate for considering my plan. Thank You. Yours sincerely,
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal
Desai
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