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crime is a big problem in the world, many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it to what extent do you agree or disagree? give your opinion.

#crime #world
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,
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undoubtly
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undoubtedly
 is one of
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barrier
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 in the world. The majority of
people
 think there
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 no measures to deter the increasing
crime
rate
. I strongly opine that
,
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this
view
 is
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unrational
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irrational
 scepticism. By
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experience
 of
great
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 rise in
crime
rate
, many
of
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people
 are disappointed about finding a viable way to curb the violations. One of the
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basic
reason
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reasons
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of
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this
view
 relates to
lack
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the lack
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 of obvious
defenition
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definition
 for why
people
 are
perpetrating
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perpetuating
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 the
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offences
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. with regard to the reasons
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committing
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crime
, there is no denying that, have a fundamental correlation with income inequalities, motivation for
carring
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carrying
caring
 out violation and feel
resentfull
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resentful
 of the authorities and government (
this
 reason would cause property
crime
).
Furthermore
, we can take the steps to solve the crimes. As far as the solutions of
crime
 are concerned, the officials should invest more in
education
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 of
people
 about
illigal
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illegal
 and criminal actions, rather than, just prevent the
crime
 from happening or tackle with it.
For instance
, by holding
ceminars
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seminars
 in schools and handing out leaflets about new
legislations
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legislation
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 which curb the violent crimes. the
awarness
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awareness
 of society can be increased, so as to the opportunity of perpetration violent
crime
are
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 being reduced. in
term
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terms
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 of petty and non-violent
crime
,
impose
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 a reasonable fine
migh
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might
 be helpful and that would act as much of a deterrent. overall, by rising
crime
rate
, the mass of
people
 believe there is no way to curb the
crime
. I strongly opine that
,
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this
view
 caused the negative effect on the society,
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therefore
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therefor
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therefore
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 they don't properly combat
cime
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time
crime
, while there
are
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 feasible
measure
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measures
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 to control and prevent that. If we continue to follow our negative
view
, in the near future the
rate
 of
crime
 will increase more and more.
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