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Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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The giving pie charts illustrate the distribution of workers in three fields, namely services, manufacturing and sales, in
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towns for the years 1960 and 2010. Overall, there seems to be a downward trend in
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eployees'
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 preferences to work in shopping jobs;
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, production-related occupations had become more popular among these towns' residents in that period . Regarding 1960, having accounted for more than two-thirds, Sales was the predominant
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 among the
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's inhabitants.
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 A
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 had joined the same trend by making up 40% in the Shopping aspect.
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this
 area Services and Manufacturers had the roughly equal portions, approximately one out of three.
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, these two professions
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 constituted by 30% combined in
town
B
. Turning to 2010, the main feature was the significant
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 in trading jobs, which were the most popular ones in 1960 in both cities.
This
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career
 had experienced being halved in
town
 A and being reduced by 17% in
town
B
.
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, increasing to more than two-thirds, Productions formed the main segment for
town
 A. Following
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 in
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 services had remained the most conservative part, ranging from 60% to 20% in both cities.
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