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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Nowadays,advancements in
technology
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 have made
life
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 easy for everyone.I completely agree
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 statement that it is useless to save old ways of living as everyone gets more benefits by using different types of technological items in their daily
life
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 as per their needs.I will
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 explain my opinion with some relevant examples in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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technology
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 has made many improvements in every field of
life
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.
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 of all,it made the communication method much better than past.
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,in the past
people
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 used to communicate with each other by letters or a specific person had to travel a long distance just to deliver a piece of news to his relatives.
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, travelling becomes easier with the invention of the new transportation system.
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people
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 can travel a long distance only in a few hours by using cars,aeroplanes or other vehicles;whereas,in the
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people
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 used to travel by foot or by using their animals which took a lot of
time
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 to reach their destination.So,it is useless to save the old methods as the new ways of living are far more comfortable and save a lot of
time
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.
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,
technology
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 provides many benefits to human beings.
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people
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 use different types of technological devices according to their needs like computers or laptops for their office or university work and washing machines and other
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 items for their household chores.
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, preservation of food in past was a difficult task for everyone,but nowadays,
people
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 can easily preserve their food in refrigerators.
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,it is a total waste of
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 if they use old methods. In conclusion,it is undeniable fact that advancement in
technology
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 has increased the comfortability level of humans to a greater extent in every field of
life
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 and by using new advanced devices,a person could lead a comfortable
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.So,I agree that trying to save the traditional ways of living is totally a waste of
time
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 as new methods have more benefits than older ones.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancement
  • Efficiency
  • Global connectivity
  • Cultural identity
  • Diversity
  • Innovation
  • Coexist
  • Sustainable
  • Eco-friendly
  • Energy-intensive
  • Practical skills
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Homogenize
  • Preservation
  • Global diversity
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