Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The global problem with humans buying cars and polluting
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environment
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discussion. Some
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making petrol more expensive will help to tackle traffic and pollution problems. In my opinion, I agree that the best
sollution
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solution
is to decrease growing
essues
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issues
by increasing prices as it
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will
greatly benefit
people
and
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in general.
To begin
with, I would like to state that it will greatly reduce traffic.
This
might lead to some health benefits
such
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level of stress for drivers. Most
people
who get heart issues or panic attacks in
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stated that it
happend
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happened
happen
when they were stuck in traffic jams. Another point to consider is that by reducing cars
goverments
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governments
government
will improve public transport as it
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happened
happen
in Amsterdam.
For example
,
people
in Holland started to choose bicycles to commute to work and for food shopping
instead
of cars after
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ban in big cities. Now we all know that Dutch
people
have the most advance and cheap public transport in the world.
Finally
, it will benefit
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environment
enviroment
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by reducing C02 pollution. We already are suffering from
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carbomide
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that humanity did by automobile boom in the
last
century. In the long
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people
only will win from
this
step. In conclusion, I believe that increased prices for petrol will make
life
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for drivers easier, more healthy.
This
also
is key for
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of public transport which has less harm for nature.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • discourage
  • incentivize
  • environmentally friendly
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • pollutants
  • alternative energy sources
  • sustainable economy
  • disproportionately affect
  • daily commuting
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • comprehensive solutions
  • public transportation systems
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