Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The global problem with humans buying cars and polluting
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has reached
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peak in the global discussion. Some have an opinion by making petrol more expensive will help to tackle traffic and pollution problems. In my opinion, I agree that the best solution is to decrease growing issues by increasing prices as it will greatly benefit people and ecology in general.
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with, I would like to state that it will greatly reduce traffic.
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might lead to some health benefits
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as decreased levels of stress for drivers. Most people who get heart issues or panic attacks in Uthe US stated that it happened when they were stuck in traffic jams. Another point to consider is that by reducing cars governments will improve public transport as it happened in Amsterdam.
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, the nation in Holland started to choose bicycles to commute to work and for food shopping
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of cars after the car ban in big cities. Now we all know that Dutch people have the most advance and cheap public transport in the world.
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, it will benefit the environment by reducing C02 pollution. We already are suffering from the huge carbamide footprint that humanity did by
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boom in the
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century. And now our goal should be to prevent the same mistakes. In the long run, communities will benefit from
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step. In conclusion, I believe that increased prices for petrol will make life easier for the drivers, more healthy.
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is key for the development of public transport which has less harm for the nature.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • discourage
  • incentivize
  • environmentally friendly
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • pollutants
  • alternative energy sources
  • sustainable economy
  • disproportionately affect
  • daily commuting
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • comprehensive solutions
  • public transportation systems
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