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Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree? write at least 250 words

#say #opportunity
Money
 comes with responsibility and it can be in any way
such
 as social responsibility, nation-building or community service. Many
people
, specifically, think that richness provides
this
 opportunity to help the needy. Have rich
people
 had
this
 opportunity? I think they have for two key reasons proper use of extra
money
 and supporting locals
Firstly
, their extra
money
 can be used by the underprivileged to get food or education. Certainly, wealthy
people
 have a lot of
money
, after a certain limit, which is no use for them.
This
 is the chance and they can support their native
people
 with that additional
money
. There is no doubt that they are not doing it,
for instance
, Ratan Tata, the owner of Tata Companies, is operating two NGOs, which is providing financial assistance for higher studies to students who are talented but with bad financial conditions.
Thus
, more
people
 will be benefited from one person's wealth.
In addition
, it is their social responsibility to support
people
 who helped them to get there.
Although
 all efforts to reach higher heights were there, directly or indirectly others have contributed to it. They are in a position in which they can be returned to society. It can be in any form
such
 as opening free schools, old age homes etc.
For example
, ISCON, a group of wealthy
people
 from Rajasthan, is building free amenities for locals. It is giving back. In conclusion, the privileged person has
this
 chance of improving their nation with the extra
money
. Though it is their hard-earned
money
, returning to your supporter and increasing the use of the
money
 they should focus on.
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