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Some people believe that adults get motivated to exercise and play sports because of the major sports events such as the olympic games and the football worldcup. Others say that there are many ways apart from TV to encourage them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is considered by some
people
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 that broadcasting the major
sports
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events
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,
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 as Olympic games and the football world cup encourages adults to indulge themselves in
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 and
exercise
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.
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, other
people
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 think that there are better ways to fulfil
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 purpose. I am of the opinion that apart from TV, the focus should be turned to the other methods of motivation. On the one hand, it is thought by some that these huge
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events
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 serve the purpose of motivating adults to
exercise
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 more often because of the concept of idealisation.
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The majority
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 of the
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 tends to have their idols in their favourite teams, and
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, owing to their fantasy, they get encouraged by watching these shows,
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, a few of my cousins starts to
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 more often during the world cup season.
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, it is frequently thought that the human psyche benefits more from visual lessons as compared to
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verbal teachings. The concepts learned from images or videos are far clear and concise. To illustrate
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, giving lectures to someone about
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 seems less interesting than providing them with some exciting clips of the major
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events
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.
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, other
people
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 consider that the other methods of motivation for
exercise
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 are better than the above-mentioned ways and I agree.
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, watching these mega-
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 on the television is not considered healthy, because doing so, changes the sport from an outdoor to an indoor activity,
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 promoting a sedentary lifestyle, and resulting in an increased risk of a number of serious issues,
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, obesity, heart attacks and strokes etc.
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, teenagers start strenuous exercises under the influence of these sportsmen, which could be detrimental, if done without supervision. Nowadays, good fitness trainers are available for guidance regarding
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 important issue. To illustrate the significance of
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 point, these fitness trainers should be hired, in order to teach the youngsters about keeping balance in their diet and
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 regimens. In conclusion, while these
sports
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events
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 are exciting, in my opinion, spending time in front of the television for motivation purposes regarding
exercise
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, is not a wise decision and the other more healthy ways should be considered to fulfil
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 requirement.
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