Some countries are considering imposing curfews in which teenagers will not be allowed outdoors at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this policy?

In recent years, the government has paid more attention

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teenagers by imposing several curfews. While there are many benefits to

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restrictions to teenagers having a late-

night

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event without the adult, there are

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drawbacks to be considered. In

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essay, I tend to disagree with the former argument that it will have negative impacts on

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development.

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, introducing the legislation of not allowing teenagers to go out at

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with the absence of the adult helps prevent them from being bullied or

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kids

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kid napped

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. The reason for

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is the gang always work on the

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shift with less police patrol, which might be easy for them to approach and pose

serious

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threat to adolescents for money.

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, the less the children leave home at

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, the less they can avoid social crimes,

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as smoking,

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heroine with bad friends.

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the other hand, my view is that

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limitation might have reverse effects on the younger to mature.

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will put pressure on their mental health.

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, while students would have to spend most

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daylight

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studying at

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school, they might eliminate their academic pressure by hanging out in the evening.

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, if the authority did not encourage the children to have

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night

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out without parents' supervision, the young could not self-address troubles at

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certain time since parents are not always with them. In conclusion,

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the curfew can physically protect adolescents from

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criminal

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, it is impossible to work in long run. In my opinion, facing nightly serious situations plays an essential role in the path to children becoming mature and independently-minded adults.