Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some schools, students can volunteer for public duties like working in a group

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, these should be a compulsory part of high school schedules and

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students should not gain money with these works. I definitely agree with

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.  good start One positive side is that when children are young, working in an unpaid service for

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is significantly important to their personal improvement. Since they will have a chance to experience some

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problems and how they can help to raise these issues.

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, there are some environmental problems and when they have a mission at a charity, they can help to solve it.

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, because of increasing knowledge about

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may help to broaden their horizons.

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, they will be

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in the future. Another positive aspect of these compulsory programmes is

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advantage for people living in a

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. Generally, charities deal with finding workers or some parts of

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suffer from poverty. To solve these,

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, students can have a role in a charity thanks to compulsory

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work.

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, as I say, they can help poor people's children in many ways like teaching them some sports.

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will have a considerable impact on the future of the

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. In conclusion, high schools are suitable places to improve student's

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. If unpaid

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service is a compulsory part of education, it may lead to

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increase of knowledge about

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and what problems are present

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there.

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is beneficial for the budget of volunteer groups, and

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, poor people. Because of that I strongly agree with

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