Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some schools, students can volunteer for public duties like working in a group

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For one aspect,

however

, these should be a compulsory part of high school schedules and

also

students should not gain money with these works. I definitely agree with

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opinion and in

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essay, I will explain why it should be like

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.  good start One positive side is that when children are young, working in an unpaid service for

society

is significantly important to their personal improvement. Since they will have a chance to experience some

real world

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problems and how they can help to raise these issues.

For instance

, there are some environmental problems and when they have a mission at a charity, they can help to solve it.

In addition

, because of increasing knowledge about

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,

this

may help to broaden their horizons.

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, they will be

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a conscious

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adult

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for

society

in the future. Another positive aspect of these compulsory programmes is

financial

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advantage for people living in a

community

. Generally, charities deal with finding workers or some parts of

society

suffer from poverty. To solve these,

firstly

, students can have a role in a charity thanks to compulsory

community

work.

Secondly

, as I say, they can help poor people's children in many ways like teaching them some sports.

This

will have a considerable impact on the future of the

community

. In conclusion, high schools are suitable places to improve student's

personality

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. If unpaid

community

service is a compulsory part of education, it may lead to

early

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increase of knowledge about

society

and what problems are present

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there.

In addition

to that,

this

is beneficial for the budget of volunteer groups, and

also

, poor people. Because of that I strongly agree with

this

opinion