Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is fault of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Everything has two sides for and against and the question if

governments

are responsible for children's adiposity is not an exception. While others have an opinion that family influences on

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much stronger.

This

essay discusses both views and argues that lifestyle comes from the family.

Firstly

, some persons consider that

governments

can control minors' obesity. It is reached by

significant

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decrease

the

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in the

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number of harmful

food

on sale. Children can not control and change their own habits on

food

. It leads to unconscious consumption of sweets and fat meals.

Moreover

, almost all these products are

more tasty

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than vegetables or fruits and

this

fact especially attracts youth people. And

definitely

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governments

have to motion the quality of

such

food

and reduce its amount in shops. But in my opinion, parents and guardians are the only individuals who can improve the situation with minors' obesity. Undoubtedly, the family gives the habits to do sports daily and eat healthy

food

instead

of fast

food

.

For instance

, many studies lately show that the most common reasons

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children's adiposity are due to habits and lifestyle which are given by their family.

Therefore

, only parents can improve it. In conclusion, it is important to say that

overweight

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being overweight

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is one of the most relevant problems nowadays.

Accordingly

, both

governments

and parents have to throw all

the

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strength to solve

this

harmful and hazardous society issue.